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FIC : Doesn’t Anything Else Writhe? - Round One 
14th-Mar-2006 06:36 pm [2006, pg-13, round 1, shocolate]
Thinking of you
Title: Doesn’t Anything Else Writhe?
Author: shocolate
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Words: 1300
Rating: PG-13

Written for the hprwfqf First Round.

My prompt was…

At Hogwarts :- 7. Ron becomes the first person to touch Harry's scar besides Harry. It's a big deal to Harry.

It seems to be a Missing Moment at Christmas in HBP – hence the lack of smut!

Thanks, as ever, to magicofisis for, um, well, reading it....

Doesn’t Anything Else Writhe?
14th-Mar-2006 06:58 pm (UTC)
Aww, this was wonderfully sweet. I liked how light it was - very teenage boyish - but also not a Big Horny Moment for them, either. (Not that that can't be fun ;) but it's nice to have some variety.) Anyway, I really enjoyed every moment of this, including the title.

I remembered how impressed he’d been on the train, the first time he’d seen it. And how quickly he’d moved past that.

Which is one of the absolute best things about Ron. *squishes him*
14th-Mar-2006 07:05 pm (UTC)
Yes - I couldn't achieve smut at school anymore!!!

*squishes him too*

*and you*
14th-Mar-2006 07:03 pm (UTC)
*sniff* Oh, what a way to kick this off! So, sweet, and Ron and Harry are so wonderful together. weetheart! *giggles*
14th-Mar-2006 07:05 pm (UTC)
How is he gonna explain that to Lavender???

Thank you!!
14th-Mar-2006 07:04 pm (UTC)
I love the interaction of the boys here, teasing each other and just being themselves. Sweet and fluffy, but serious too.
14th-Mar-2006 07:06 pm (UTC)
Their interaction in that chapter of the book just rocked my socks - they couldn't have been closer.

*squishes them*

*and you*
14th-Mar-2006 07:30 pm (UTC)
I was wondering where this was going to go, because ya know, if they had done...anything, it couldn't be a proper missing scene, eh?

Nice! All that writhing about is pretty funny, especially when boys talk about it like that.

Still, I like 'em older when they can writhe about together.

*squidges the boys and you*
14th-Mar-2006 08:03 pm (UTC)
Well, yes, the prompt being 'at Hogwarts' - nothing could happen!

Except love.

14th-Mar-2006 07:31 pm (UTC)
Aww, I LOVE this, dear! Sigh. Their interaction was so realistic and tender. :D :D :D
14th-Mar-2006 08:03 pm (UTC)
Aww - thank you - our boys are just so cute.
14th-Mar-2006 07:55 pm (UTC)
I really like friend!fic...that has possibilities to become a More Than Friends!fic in the future. This was beautiful, and I felt the sparks that Harry felt. :-D Great FQF entry! I'm just starting to work on mine! *feels like a slacker*
14th-Mar-2006 08:04 pm (UTC)
Yes, clearly nothing could happen that Christmas - but look at how close they are in the book?

So adorable.

Thank you!
14th-Mar-2006 07:58 pm (UTC)
Oh God. I mean. Who needs smut?
*drawns in the LOVE that is H/R*
14th-Mar-2006 08:04 pm (UTC)

Just love.

He is loved.

14th-Mar-2006 08:05 pm (UTC)
This was a wonderful missing moment from the books. Very lovely and sweet. Ron's earned the right to touch that scar first!

“Look, it’s normal stuff for our age,” I said. “Just what I need, a bit of normal.”

“Well,” he sighed. “Just let me know if there is anyone else I can snog for your amusement.”

These lines--complete canon.

*huggles you*
*squishes you*
14th-Mar-2006 08:46 pm (UTC)
*loves them both so much*
14th-Mar-2006 08:31 pm (UTC)
Well done!! Very well done. I'm not sure what to say to explain it, but seriously, cool.
14th-Mar-2006 08:46 pm (UTC)
Many thanks!
14th-Mar-2006 08:36 pm (UTC)
I liked that. It was nice and subtle. There aren't enough H/R fics like this.
14th-Mar-2006 08:47 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you!!!
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14th-Mar-2006 10:10 pm (UTC)
Oh, you!!!

And Weasley is my King!!!
14th-Mar-2006 10:05 pm (UTC)
it was just wonderful, thanks a lot for this story so nice, so tender.. so beautiful.
14th-Mar-2006 10:10 pm (UTC)

*is overcome*
14th-Mar-2006 11:09 pm (UTC)
There are seriously tears brimming in my eyes...that was possibly the best fic I have ever read...H/R or otherwise. The whole premise of no one ever having touched his scar...and Ron being the first one to do so...just beautiful.

He made his ‘Fuck-I-hate-the-Dursleys-I-wish-we-could-have-taken-Harry-in-sooner-and-given-him-a-proper-childhood’ face.
Ron totally does that face.

You are a writing goddess.
14th-Mar-2006 11:21 pm (UTC)
Oh, honestly.


Ron will look after him, don't worry.
14th-Mar-2006 11:25 pm (UTC)
This was so intimate that I was more embarrassed than any smut has ever made me, because I really felt like a voyeur.

Mmm-mmm good.
14th-Mar-2006 11:28 pm (UTC)
Oh, my gosh - what a wonderful thing to say.


You made me cry!
14th-Mar-2006 11:56 pm (UTC)
so very very good. and so very canon, OH, the ron/harry love! I just love it! so sweet!

oops, I just *squee-d* :)

I'm such a slacker, my entry's no where near done.
14th-Mar-2006 11:58 pm (UTC)
So many thanks!

*squishes you*

You've got a month left!!
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